tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3039049849428602661.post2152341848492657570..comments2023-06-08T07:01:30.846-07:00Comments on Lorelei's Writing Journal: The "Dreaded" EditsLorelei Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3039049849428602661.post-54304940441455965842014-01-10T04:16:00.780-08:002014-01-10T04:16:00.780-08:00Thanks, William. I changed it even more when I wen...Thanks, William. I changed it even more when I went to write it into the manuscript.Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3039049849428602661.post-58640702804709830782014-01-09T15:39:41.394-08:002014-01-09T15:39:41.394-08:00The revised one works much better.The revised one works much better.William Kendallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00331324250821836822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3039049849428602661.post-24191548238217863412014-01-09T13:10:19.308-08:002014-01-09T13:10:19.308-08:00I hear you. Oh, how things have changed... those w...I hear you. Oh, how things have changed... those were the days, my dear!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3039049849428602661.post-43106424916156964192014-01-09T12:21:29.605-08:002014-01-09T12:21:29.605-08:00This is my least favorite part of the process. I u...This is my least favorite part of the process. I used to give my editors first drafts with a note: "Just tell me what's wrong with it!"Normahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12685538277690762655noreply@blogger.com